What I Knew Before I Wrote Borderlines
By Al Dawson
There is a question I am asked regularly about Borderlines, sometimes by readers and sometimes by people who know my background: how much of what Jace Kelly knows did you already know?
The honest answer is: most of it.
Not the specifics of his case. I am a novelist, not a federal prosecutor, and I have never personally navigated the particular crisis that Kelly faces in the novel. But the machinery he operates inside, the way it thinks, the way it makes decisions, the gap between what it is supposed to do and what it actually does when pressure is applied, that I know from the inside.
I spent a significant part of my career representing insurance clients before federal regulatory agencies. That work taught me something that law school does not teach and that no policy paper fully captures: institutions do not behave the way their charters say they will behave. They behave the way the people inside them behave. And those people are subject to all the pressures, incentives, miscommunications, and competing loyalties that human beings are always subject to.
When an agency is functioning well, the gap between the charter and the reality is small enough to be invisible. When an agency is under pressure, that gap can become the most important fact in the room.
I lobbied in Washington for years on behalf of financial institutions navigating regulatory environments that were never designed with their specific circumstances in mind. I watched good faith actors on both sides of the table reach opposite conclusions from the same set of facts. I watched policy decisions that were entirely defensible in the abstract produce consequences on the ground that nobody in the room had anticipated.
None of this made me cynical about institutions. I do not think the systems I worked within were corrupt or malicious. I think they were built by human beings to address human problems, and that human beings and human problems are more complicated than any system can fully accommodate.
That is the animating observation behind Borderlines.
Jace Kelly is not fighting a corrupt government. He is fighting a government that is functioning exactly as it was designed to function, which is to say: slowly, carefully, with appropriate attention to precedent and process and the political environment. Those are not flaws. They are features. They are what separates a functioning legal system from something more arbitrary.
But they are catastrophically insufficient when the cartel has taken your family and the clock is running.
I did not write Borderlines as a critique of American law enforcement. I wrote it as an exploration of what happens to a person who has built their professional life on a set of institutional rules and then encounters a situation those rules were not designed to handle.
The question at the center of the novel is not whether the law is right. It is what you do when the law is right but not fast enough, right but not flexible enough, right but not personal enough to help you in the specific moment you are in.
I spent thirty years watching people navigate that question in regulatory contexts where the stakes were financial and reputational. Jace Kelly navigates it in a context where the stakes are the lives of his sister and daughter.
The machinery is the same. The cost is different.
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Al Dawson is also the author of Searching for Noriko and Priest, winner of the 2025 Feathered Quill Gold Award for Adult Fiction.
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